Gather a few things See what you’ll need
- A notebook page
- A pen
- Three short sentence openings
Choose an exercise 4 things to try as you read
Choose an opening with room for your answer
Try “I noticed…”, “I wanted…” or “I’m still wondering…” for an observation, preference or question. Pick the opening that already suggests a word. Rephrase it freely.
Kathleen Adams lists sentence stems as a journal technique. A community participant describes one sentence suggesting the next. Use the stem as that first nudge, then follow your answer.
Compare the optionsChoose what the opening asks for
Choose what the opening asks for
Three stems lead into the same lunch break from different directions.
Read the words in this example
- STEM
- I noticed…
- ANSWER
- Scales from an upstairs window.
An observation stem asks for something concrete.
Supply a detail before explaining it.
ONE WORKED EXAMPLE
What quieter meant at lunch
You choose “I wanted…” and write that you wanted a quieter lunch. You want the entry to show what that preference meant in the particular afternoon you are recording.
Before
“I wanted peace” sounds complete but leaves the scene and the kind of quiet you were looking for unnamed.
After
“By quieter, I mean eating without choosing another video. I left the phone indoors and took my sandwich to the back step. Someone was practicing scales through a window.” The entry can follow that distinction or stop there.
What changed—and what to check
The follow-up gives an abstract preference a visible action. It also leaves room for an unexpected distinction: fewer choices did not require complete silence.
Try this check. Underline one action in the finished answer that another version of your day might not have contained.
GO A LITTLE FURTHERPut only three choices in front of you
“Let your answer set the follow-up.”
Complete once, then ask for a detail
Finish one stem, underline a concrete word—or a vague word needing explanation—and add “For example…” Describe an action, scene or remembered phrase.
“I noticed this when…” and “By that, I mean…” work too. Let your answer set the follow-up. After two or three sentences, you may already have enough.
To take the detail one step further, try a prompt ladder from scene to meaning.
Write your versionComplete, specify, continue
Complete, specify, continue
Replace the lunch example with one answer and a detail that belongs to it.
I wanted a quieter lunch.
I left the phone inside and ate on the back step.
It wasn’t silent; I wasn’t choosing what to listen to.
Your words have a place now.
After the detail, follow your own sentence rather than finding another prompt.
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GO A LITTLE FURTHERTurn a vague answer into a small scene
Turn a vague answer into a small scene
“I wanted a quieter lunch” becomes: “By quieter, I mean eating outside without choosing another video. I took my sandwich to the back step and heard someone practicing scales through an open window.”
Then: “It wasn’t silent; I just wasn’t deciding what to listen to.” The scene reveals a difference between silence and fewer choices that the prompt didn’t prescribe.
Try a what-ifThe stem asks for a reason you do not know
The stem asks for a reason you do not know
Change the opening to fit the evidence you have.
You start “The reason I felt distracted was…” but cannot identify a cause. You remember rereading the same paragraph several times and want to record that observation without exploring possible causes today.
Compare the three choices
Which opening best matches today’s stated writing aim?
- Use “I noticed…” to record the rereading, leaving the cause open.
That lets you write the observation you do know. You can add an explanation later if one becomes useful and supported.
- Finish the original stem with the first plausible cause.
A plausible cause is still a guess. The stem should not make you state it more firmly than you intend.
- Keep the cause-seeking stem and list several possible reasons as the entry.
A clearly labeled list of possibilities could be an honest entry on another occasion. Today, though, you chose to keep the observed rereading without exploring its causes.
Rephrase a stem when its grammar asks you to claim more than you know.
What would you try?
Choose an option to see what it would do. You can explore all three.
Rescue an answer that sounds borrowed
Read the answer as if you were explaining it to yourself in the kitchen. Would you use those words? “I embraced stillness” might become “I left the phone indoors while I ate.” Keep the language that points to your own action rather than a phrase that could fit almost anybody’s day.
If you get “nothing,” narrow the time or distance: “In the last hour, I noticed…” or “One thing within reach is…” You can also record that you don’t want to answer and stop.
GO A LITTLE FURTHERChange what the stem asks you to notice
Change what the stem asks you to notice
Vary the kind of attention: “The sound I remember is…” notices; “I would gladly repeat…” expresses preference; “I can’t yet tell whether…” holds a question open.
Tailor stems to a project. Try “The part that surprised me…” after cooking, or “The sentence I kept returning to…” after reading.
Compare the optionsTune a stem to what you are doing
Tune a stem to what you are doing
The opening can belong to the activity already in your day.
Read the words in this example
- STEM
- The part that surprised me was…
- ANSWER
- How much the lemon changed it.
Ask about a surprising result.
The answer can be practical or descriptive.
GO A LITTLE FURTHERKnow when the prompt has done enough
Know when the prompt has done enough
Once an answer has one recognizable detail, stop adding prompts. Follow the words already there, or finish after four lines.
If an opening helped, write it on a small reusable slip after you finish. Keep only the stems you actually return to. The next entry can begin from that slip or from a sentence of its own; collecting more prompts is not required.
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Where this idea began
The method references explain the underlying ideas. Community links show the questions and experiences that helped shape this guide; they are not a popularity ranking. The worked examples here are our own.
- Community discussionWhat do you write about when you don’t know what to write about?
A reply suggests letting one sentence prompt the next and writing about feeling stuck rather than requiring a significant event.
- Method referenceA Short Course in Journal Writing — Kathleen Adams
Defines sentence stems as unfinished openings completed by the journal writer.



